ALDO
I don’t think that the story the kid wrote actually happened to him because he is 12 and he’s writing about the whole life of a boy from his birth till he is a grown up.
The story is about a boy who was born in Italy and whose parents were really old so that his dad soon died because of some disease. His mum couldn’t care for his and her life cause she was really poor. So she gave him away to nuns and he found new friends and went to school and married a pretty girl. But in the end he goes back to his parent’s house to care for his really old mum.
First of all, I don’t see the intention of the story at all; I can’t find any sense in it other than a child that wanted to write a story. It actually is not written that bad regarding the authors age. It’s kind of boring to read because there is almost no dialogue at all and the characters are not well described. It describes what the main character felt at some points, but the thoughts of the author are totally excluded. To me it doesn’t really appeal, its just some story which doesn’t even make me sad or anything because there is no really context for it.
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